Doe, a deer, a female deer! Ray, a drop of falling thesis statements!
Hello, I am doing a history paper on the von Trapps. I was wondering if you would look at my working thesis and help me make it stronger. I don't know how much you can help me but I'm grateful if you can help at all.
Here is my thesis:
Maria came to the von Trapp family to tutor a sickly child, with them she found love, family, and music.