If the Phrase Doesn’t Fit, You Must “OMIT”
You will often see the answer choice “OMIT the underlined
portion.” By choosing it, you can remove the entire underlined portion
from the passage.
When an answer choice allows you to “OMIT the underlined
portion,” think hard about that option. “OMIT,” when it appears
as an answer, is correct approximately 25 percent of the time. We
don’t suggest that you go through the test ticking off “OMIT” for
every possible question, but we do want you to consider it as an
answer.
“OMIT” is an attractive (and often correct) answer because
it eliminates redundant or irrelevant statements. (For more on redundancy,
see the “Style” section under “Rhetorical Skills Questions on the
English Test.”) For example,
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| The bag was free. | I didn’t have to pay for it. |
| | 21 |
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21. | A. | NO CHANGE |
| B. | I paid five dollars for it. |
| | C. | I paid almost nothing for it. |
| | D. | Omit the underlined portion |
The ACT writers want your edits to make the
passage as concise as possible. A statement like the one above should
strike you as redundant because you clearly don’t need to pay for
something that’s free—so why say the same thing twice? If you choose choice
A, you keep the redundant sentence in the passage and get the answer
wrong. Choices B and C don’t make much sense because they have you
paying for the free bag. Choice D is the correct answer
because it omits an unnecessary statement. Without the second sentence,
a reader still understands that the free bag didn’t cost anything.
When deciding whether to omit, read the passage
or sentence without the underlined portion and see whether the new
version of the sentence makes as much, if not more, sense to you
as the original. If it does, go ahead and choose “OMIT.” If the
passage or sentence loses something in the omission, then turn to
the other answer choices.