Know Your Customers
After you finish taking the SAT, your essay is scanned
into a computer, uploaded to a secure website, and graded on computer
screens at remote locations by “essay-graders.” These essay-graders
are either English teachers or writing teachers who have been hired
and trained to grade SAT essays by the company that makes the SAT. Every
essay is actually read by two graders. Each grader is instructed
to spend no more than three minutes reading an
essay before giving it a score on a scale of 1–6. The two grades
are then added together to make up your entire essay subscore, which
ranges from 2–12. (If two graders come to wildly different scores
for an essay, like a 2 and a 5, a third grader is brought in.)
So the essay graders are your customers.
You want to give them an essay that tastes just like what they’re
expecting. How are you supposed to know what they’re expecting?
You can learn exactly what SAT essay-graders expect by looking at
two very important guidelines: the actual SAT essay directions and
the grading criteria that the SAT gives the graders.
The SAT Essay Directions
The first thing you should not do when
writing your SAT essay is read the directions. Don’t waste your
time on the real test. Instead, read the directions now and make sure
you understand them.
Directions: Consider
carefully the following excerpt and the assignment below it. Then
plan and write an essay that explains your ideas as persuasively
as possible. Keep in mind that the support you provide—both reasons
and examples—will help make your view convincing to the reader.
You have twenty-five minutes to plan and
write an essay on the topic assigned below. DO NOT WRITE ON ANOTHER
TOPIC. AN ESSAY ON ANOTHER TOPIC IS NOT ACCEPTABLE.
The essay is assigned to give you an opportunity
to show how well you can write. You should, therefore, take care
to express your thoughts on the topic clearly and effectively. How well
you write is much more important than how much you write, but to
cover the topic adequately you will probably need to write more
than one paragraph. Be specific.
Your essay must be written on the lines
provided on your answer sheet. You will receive no other paper on
which to write. You will find that you have enough space if you
write on every line, avoid wide margins, and keep your handwriting
to a reasonable size. It is important to remember that what you
write will be read by someone who is not familiar with your handwriting.
Try to write or print so that what you are writing is legible to
the reader. |
We’ve translated these directions into a list of Dos and
Don’ts to make all the rules easier to grasp:
| DO |
DON’T |
| Write only on the given
topic as directed. |
Write on a topic that relates
vaguely to the one given. |
| Take a clear position on the
topic. |
Take a wishy-washy position
or try to argue two sides. |
| Write persuasively to
convince the grader. |
Write creatively or ornately
just to show off. |
| Include reasons and examples
that support your position. |
Include examples not directly
related to your position. |
| Write with correct
grammar and spelling. |
Forget to proof your work for
spelling and grammar mistakes. |
| Write as clearly as possible. |
Use too many fancy vocabulary
words or overly long sentences. |
| Write specifically and concretely. |
Be vague or use generalizations. |
| Write more than one paragraph. |
Put more importance on
length than on quality. |
| Write only on the given lined
paper. |
Make your handwriting too large
or you’ll sacrifice space. |
| Write as neatly as possible
in print or cursive. |
Write in cursive if you can
print.
Print is much easier to read. |
The Grader’s Instructions
The graders must refer to a set-in-stone list of criteria
when evaluating each essay and deciding what grade (1 through 6)
it deserves. The following chart is our explanation of the grading
criteria that the SAT gives the graders.
| Score |
Description of Essay |
| 6 |
A 6 essay is superior and
demonstrates a strong and consistent command of
the language throughout the entire essay, with at most a few small errors.
A 6 essay: • shows a firm grasp of critical
thinking and takes a powerful and interesting position on the topic •
supports and develops its position with appropriate and insightful examples,
arguments, and evidence • is tightly organized
and focused, with a smooth and coherent progression of ideas •
demonstrates a facility with language through the use of descriptive and
appropriate vocabulary • uses intelligent variation
in sentence structure • contains, at
most, a few errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation. |
| 5 |
A 5 essay is strong and demonstrates
a generally consistent command of language throughout
the entire essay, with no more than a few significant flaws and
errors. A 5 essay: • shows well-developed critical
thinking skills by taking a solid position on the topic •
supports and develops its position on the topic with appropriate examples,
arguments, and evidence • is organized and focused
and features a coherent progression of ideas •
demonstrates competence with language throughout by using appropriate
vocabulary • uses varied sentence structure •
contains few errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation. |
| 4 |
A 4 essay is competent and
demonstrates a basic command of the language throughout
the entire essay. A 4 essay: • shows adequate
critical thinking skill by taking a position on the topic and supporting
that position with generally appropriate examples, arguments, and
evidence • is mostly organized and focused,
with a progression of ideas that is mostly coherent •
demonstrates inconsistent facility with language and uses mostly appropriate
vocabulary • uses some variation in sentence
structure • contains some errors in grammar,
spelling, and punctuation. |
| 3 |
A 3 essay shows developing competence and
contains one or more of the following: •
some critical thinking skills, as demonstrated by its position on
the topic • inadequate support or development
of its position based on deficiencies in examples, arguments, or
evidence presented • lapses in organization
and focus, including ideas that are not always coherent •
a capacity for competent use of language, with occasional use of vague
or inappropriate vocabulary • only minor variation
in sentence structure • a variety of errors
in grammar, spelling, and punctuation. |
| 2 |
A 2 essay is seriously flawed and
demonstrates a poor command of the language throughout
the entire essay. A 2 essay contains one or more of
the following: • poor critical thinking skills
as shown by an inconsistent or unclear position on the topic •
insufficient support for the position on the topic as a result of
faulty or nonexistent examples, arguments, and evidence •
weak organization and focus, including ideas that are frequently incoherent •
poor language skills through use of limited or wrong vocabulary •
errors in sentence structure • errors in grammar,
spelling, punctuation, and other rules of writing that make the
meaning hard to understand |
| 1 |
A 1 essay is profoundly flawed and
demonstrates a very poor command of the language
throughout the entire essay. A 1 essay contains one or more of the
following: • no position on the topic, or almost
no support or development of the position •
poor organization and focus that makes the essay incoherent •
numerous vocabulary errors • fundamental errors
in sentence structure • errors in grammar, spelling,
and punctuation that make parts of the essay unintelligible. |
| 0 |
Essays written on a topic other than the one
assigned will receive a score of zero. |