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Ultimate Style. The Rules of Writing. Real Writers Need Rules.
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Parallel Structure
Sentences must have parallel structure. That is, they must start, continue, and end in the same way.
Lists
It’s especially common to find errors of parallelism in sentences that list actions or items. If you list two gerunds, don’t switch and list a noun; if you list two nouns, don’t switch and list a phrase; and so on.
Ugly: Porter never liked drinking wine, eating cheese, or cocktail parties.
• Porter never liked drinking wine, eating cheese, or going to cocktail parties.
• Porter never liked wine, cheese, or cocktail parties.
Awkward: The car is sleek, fast, and exhilarates whoever drives it.
• The car is red, sleek, fast, and exhilarating.
If you’re writing a list in which the first item is preceded by a preposition or an article, be consistent with the rest of the list. Either leave out the following prepositions/articles (it’s allowed) or include the prepositions/articles before every item.
• Todd’s mother told him that he was irresponsible, unthinking, and smug.
• Todd’s mother told him that he was irresponsible, that he was unthinking, and that he was smug.
either . . . or and company
Watch out for errors of parallelism when you use either . . . or, neither . . . nor, both . . . and, not only . . . but also. The words on either side of those equations must use parallel structure.
Awkward: Not only did you insult me, but also my mother.
• Not only did you insult me, but you also insulted my mother.
• You insulted not only me but also my mother.

 
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