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Dialogue
Dialogue, or reported speech between several people or characters, is commonly enclosed in quotation marks and set off with commas from the rest of the sentence. Most commonly, each new speaker begins a new paragraph.
•    “I don’t think I like Mrs. Schwein-Bazel,” said Daisy with a heavy sigh. “Yesterday, she poked me in the shoulder with her ugly red ruler.”
     Ginger nodded. “Do you think,” she asked in a tinny voice, “that she’s a witch?”
     Daisy thought carefully and then replied, “I would expect a witch to have more warts.”
  
  
Beginning Quotations
A quotation may or may not start a sentence. Either way, a complete sentence should start with a capital letter.
• “Why, pray tell, did you give me a giant stuffed cactus for Christmas?” asked Julia.
• Her mother spat back, “Because you’re as prickly as a cactus thorn.”
Be sure to put the comma after a word like said or replied outside the opening quotation mark.
Ending QuotationS
If the quotation ends the sentence, then keep its original punctuation. The sentence will end with the closing quotation mark.
• Julia remarked, “But a stuffed cactus isn’t really very prickly, is it?”
• Julia shouted, “You’re insufferable!”
• Julia pulled herself together. “I am leaving.”
If the quotations ends in a period, change that period to a comma if the sentence keeps going after the closing quotation mark. Do not change exciting end punctuation like question marks and exclamation points, even if the sentence keeps going.
• “Don’t you agree, Mr. Tweely?” asked Emily with a sly smile.
• “Absolutely not!” he replied.
• “A pity,” replied Emily coolly.
Unfinished Speech
Use an ellipsis to indicate that a speaker has trailed off.
• “I don’t think . . . That is, I’d prefer to come back later.”
• “She hesitated. “Well, if you wish . . . ”
Use a dash to indicate an interruption or an abrupt stop.
• “Actually, my parents hate—” Sarah caught herself. “I’ll tell them you stopped by.”
Spelling Out
Spell out most words in dialogue. In particular, spell out all numbers.
• “I gave her seventy-five dollars to pay for the damages, but she still wouldn’t return Fluffy!”
If the dialogue involves complicated numbers, it may be clearer to use numerals.
• “I paid him $135.26 to get his phone number: 095-386-2947.”

 
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