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Faulty Comparisons
Faulty comparisons occur when two things are compared inappropriately, or in a way that could confuse readers.
Unclear: Mark pines for Chris more than Kitty.
This sentence could mean either that Mark pines for Chris more than Kitty pines for Chris, or that Mark pines for Chris more than he pines for Kitty.
Fixing Faulty Comparisons
Make sure you are comparing two similar things.
Faulty: Penny’s phone bill is bigger than Duncan.
In the problem sentence above, the writer means to compare Penny’s phone bill to Duncan’s phone bill, but she winds up comparing the phone bill to Duncan. Make sure you compare object to object.
clear: Penny’s phone bill is bigger than Duncan’s phone bill.
Undesirable: Trina goes to the ballet less than Roger.
In the problem sentence about Trina’s ballet-viewing habits, going to the ballet is compared to Roger. Make sure you compare action to action.
clear: Trina goes to the ballet less often than Roger does.

 

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