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Ultimate Style. The Rules of Writing. Real Writers Need Rules.
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Gendered Language
Try to avoid using he, his, or him whenever you’re describing an unknown or imagined person. The constant use of male pronouns is sexist.
Undesirable: When a doctor operates, he should listen to classical music.
There are several ways to avoid reflexively referring to men. Each option has its own problems and benefits. Whichever option you choose, be sure that it is consistent in context.
Alternation
You can alternate between using male and female pronouns. This option requires careful attention but also allows you to avoid some ambiguity.
• The student forced to rise at six o’clock won’t be able to focus on his schoolwork. The student who wakes up at ten o’clock will be alert and ready to face her work. She will be less tired than he.
Rewriting
You can avoid the problem by rewriting.
• Students forced to rise at six A.M. won’t be able to focus on their schoolwork. Students who wake up at ten A.M. will be alert and ready to face their work.
• The unknown culprit will face the vice principal’s wrath.
S/He and Similar
You can concoct a combination of male and female pronouns such as she/he, s/he, him/her, his/hers. This option can be unsightly.
• The culprit, whoever s/he is, will face the vice principal’s wrath.
Their
What you cannot do is match a singular noun with the plural possessive their in an attempt to be gender neutral.
Undesirable: Someone left their prom tickets on the bench.
• Someone left her prom tickets on the bench.
• Someone left his or her prom tickets on the bench.
Undesirable: Whoever wants to go to the water park should bring their bathing suit.
• Whoever wants to go to the water park should bring his bathing suit.
• If you want to go to the water park, bring your bathing suit.

 
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