How Is the Essay Scored?
Ah, the million-dollar question. Let’s talk
about a few different aspects of scoring.
Holistic Scoring
Writing—even writing a first draft in 25 minutes—is an
extremely complex task. Each element of good writing depends at
least partially on every other element. Therefore, essays are graded holistically.
Holistic scoring means that the parts make up the whole. In other
words, the parts that make up an essay, such as grammar, logic,
usage, sentence structure, and the use of evidence, cannot be judged
in isolation from one another. They can only be understood (and
judged) in relation to one another and as parts of a whole essay.
The College Board aims to reward you for what you do right rather than
punish you for what you do wrong.
The Scoring Rubric
The scoring rubric is a chart that instructs readers on
how to score the essay. Each of your two readers will give your
essay a score between 1 and 6, with 6 being the highest. (If you
write nothing, or write on a topic not asked about in the prompt,
you’ll get a 0.)
The scoring rubric is organized by score level. The several
features of a 6 are listed, then the features of a 5, a 4, and so
forth.
Dissecting the Scoring Rubric
We’re going to look at the scoring rubric in the following
way. First, we want to show which features appear across the score
levels. That will highlight exactly what the readers are trained
to consider when assessing your essay. Then we’ll discuss the scoring
rubric in detail, feature by feature, showing the differences between
and among the various score levels. By studying the scoring rubric
in detail, you’ll start to understand what your writing should include
and what you should avoid. Most important, you’ll gain an understanding
of how The College Board defines good writing, which is not necessarily
identical to how you, your friends, or your parents may define it.
In a sense, we are giving you a crash course in how to
grade an SAT essay. In becoming an essay-reader, you will know how
to give the real readers exactly what they want.
Here’s a distilled version of the scoring rubric, showing
what features of writing readers are trained to assess. Note that
the first feature is all about holistic scoring—the general overall
impression the reader has of your essay.
| Score |
6 |
5 |
4 |
| Features |
General
overall impression |
| Point of view;
critical thinking; examples, reasons, and evidence |
| Organization,
focus, coherence, and flow |
| Vocabulary and
use of language |
| Sentence structure |
| Errors in grammar
and usage |
| Score |
3 |
2 |
1 |
| Features |
General
overall impression |
| Point of view;
critical thinking; examples, reasons, and evidence |
| Organization,
focus, coherence, and flow |
| Vocabulary and
use of language |
| Sentence structure |
| Errors in grammar
and usage |
Note how we divide the upper-half scores (4, 5, and 6)
and the lower-half scores (1, 2, and 3). We’ll return to the significance
of this division in a subsequent section.
This scoring rubric determines which concepts are essential
for you to master.
General Overall Impression
Remember, essays are graded holistically; this feature
represents an overall impression.
| Score Level |
Defining Characteristics |
| 6 |
An exceptional essay
that shows sustained expertise,
but which contains a few minor errors |
| 5 |
A successful essay
that shows mostly sustained expertise, even though it contains occasional
mistakes or slips in quality |
| 4 |
An adequate essay
that shows competence, but which contains more than occasional mistakes
or slips in quality |
| 3 |
An insufficient essay
that shows signs of evolving competence and features one or more
specific flaws |
| 2 |
A weak essay that
shows serious limitations, insufficient facility, and which features
one or more specific flaws |
| 1 |
An essentially deficient essay
that displays fundamental inability and features severe manifestations
of one or more specific flaws |
| 0 |
No essay written. Essay
that doesn’t respond to the assignment. An
illegible essay |
These are the general characteristics that readers keep
in mind. Let’s now discuss the one or more specific flaws mentioned
in the chart above. These are the more specific features of writing
the readers will be on the lookout for.
Point of View; Critical Thinking; and Examples,
Reasons, and Evidence
First, let’s define some terms:
Point of View: Keep in mind that we’re
dealing with persuasive writing. You must take a stand on the issue
presented, and you’ll need to present a definite point of view.
Critical Thinking: Your essay will be
graded, in part, on how deep your analysis is and how unique your
thoughts are.
Examples, Reasons, and Evidence: We’ve
touched on this before. All of your experience and knowledge
is fair game—the key is to use appropriate examples
that help build your case. You should have at least a couple of reasons
for your point of view and ample evidence, including examples, to back
up your reasons. (We’ll provide a template for you in Essential
Strategies that will ensure that your essay fulfills these requirements.)
Now let’s look at the
different score levels with these features in mind:
| Score Level |
Defining Characteristics |
| 6 |
Impressively insightful point
of view Outstanding
critical thinking Completely
appropriate reasons, examples, and evidence to support point of
view |
| 5 |
Well-developed point of view Strong
critical thinking Generally
appropriate reasons, examples, and evidence to support point of
view |
| 4 |
Fairly well developed point
of view Adequate
critical thinking Mostly
appropriate reasons, examples, and evidence to support point of
view |
| 3 |
Develops a point of view Some
evidence of critical thinking, but inconsistently apparent Sometimes
inappropriate reasons, examples, and evidence to support point of
view |
| 2 |
Develops a vague point of view Little
evidence of critical thinking Insufficient
or inappropriate reasons, examples, and evidence to support point
of view |
| 1 |
Does not develop a point of
view No evidence
of critical thinking Little
or no evidence to support point of view |
The scoring rubric has a lot to say on these three components
of good writing. That should tell you something: the SAT wants you
to demonstrate the ability to create a reasonable argument that
displays some independent and reasonably deep thinking that you support rather
than simply state.
Critical thinking is all about building a
good argument; encouraging and rewarding critical thinking is the
goal of the essay. (We’ll discuss the basics of argumentation in
a subsequent section.)
Organization, Focus, Coherence, and Flow
A primary characteristic of good writing is a well-organized
and coherent argument that is focused and flows naturally.
Here is how these features play out in the scoring rubric:
| Score Level |
Defining Characteristics |
| 6 |
Well organized Tightly
focused Tight
coherence Smooth
flow of ideas |
| 5 |
Well organized Focused Coheres
reasonably well Mostly
smooth flow of ideas |
| 4 |
Generally organized Generally
focused Shows
some coherence Discernable
but not particularly smooth flow of ideas |
| 3 |
Partially organized Partially
unfocused Some
incoherent portions Interrupted
or disrupted flow of ideas |
| 2 |
Poorly organized Mostly
unfocused Systemic
problems with incoherence Flow
of ideas difficult to discern |
| 1 |
Disorganized Unfocused Incoherent Flow
of ideas impossible to discern or entirely absent |
Compare this chart to the others in this section. Note
that the SAT is pretty tough on disorganization, lack of focus,
and incoherence. In fact, we can probably conclude that this feature
of writing is the biggest concern. Readers want to see how well
you can create, plan, and execute a persuasive piece of writing.
If you’re disorganized or unfocused, you’ll be unpersuasive.
Don’t worry—we have a plan and a method for you. You’ll
encounter it soon. But let’s continue dissecting the scoring rubric.
Vocabulary and Use of Language
One component of effective writing is choosing the appropriate
word and using a varied vocabulary. Study the following chart, noting
the differences between the characteristics that define each score
level:
| Score Level |
Defining Characteristics |
| 6 |
Skilled use of language Varied,
accurate, and appropriate vocabulary |
| 5 |
Capable use of language Appropriate
vocabulary |
| 4 |
Satisfactory but inconsistent
use of language Generally
appropriate vocabulary |
| 3 |
Inconsistent use of language
that shows signs of evolving competence Some
inappropriate word choice; weak vocabulary |
| 2 |
Insufficient use of language Very
limited vocabulary or incorrect word choice |
| 1 |
Basic vocabulary errors |
The take-home message here is that misusing highfalutin,
ten-dollar words will definitely hurt you. Using appropriate, reasonably
varied vocabulary will help get you toward the top of the scoring
rubric.
Sentence Structure
Bill went to the store. Bill got some
milk. Bill met Jane. Jane got some gum. Bill and Jane said good-bye.
Bill went home. |
Are you bored yet? The SAT will look for varied sentence
structure. Simply writing “subject-verb-object” declarative sentences
over and over again will put a ceiling on your score. Let’s see
what the scoring rubric looks for at each score level.
| Score Level |
Defining Characteristics |
| 6 |
Displays meaningful variety |
| 5 |
Displays variety |
| 4 |
Displays some variety |
| 3 |
Does not display variety Displays
problems |
| 2 |
Displays frequent problems |
| 1 |
Displays serious and widespread
problems |
Merely displaying some variety in your sentences will
help get you a 4, 5, or 6. But note the difference between a 5 and
a 6: the purposeful and significant use of particular types of sentences
will earn you a 6. (We’ll discuss the basics of sentence structure
in Essential Concepts.)
Errors in Grammar, Usage, and Mechanics
Grammar, usage, and mechanics are the rules of written
language. But note how forgiving the SAT is about these rules. While
you can’t ignore them, you do have some grammatical leeway: the
readers are realistic about what degree of accuracy is reasonable
to expect in a 25-minute, high-pressure essay.
| Score Level |
Defining Characteristics |
| 6 |
Free of most errors |
| 5 |
On the whole, free of most errors |
| 4 |
Has some errors |
| 3 |
Has a lot of errors |
| 2 |
Has so many errors that meaning
is partially hidden |
| 1 |
Persistent and widespread errors
that obscure meaning |
Note that even a 6 does not need to be error-free. Readers
know that this is a first draft written by teenagers
under strict time constraints and a lot of pressure. Readers are
out to give you the highest score they can. The next section will
show you exactly how.
How the Essay-Readers Apply the Scoring Rubric
Remember, the overarching principle of essay-scoring
is to do so holistically. So, while readers use the scoring rubric
as a guide, they also adhere to several other general principles
and procedures when scoring your essay.
First, remember that your essay will be read not by one,
but by two different readers. If their scores differ by more than
one point, a third, very experienced reader is brought in. Second,
readers are trained to read your entire essay quickly to get a general
impression. They then score it immediately. That is a very effective
way to keep the readers focused on holistic grading: readers don’t
have the time to get nitpicky. Scoring decisions often occur in
two steps:
- Step 1: Readers first decide whether an
essay is in the top or bottom half of the scoring rubric—is it a
1, 2, 3 or a 4, 5, 6?
- Step 2: Then they make decisions within the “half”—is
it a 4 or a 5? Is it maybe a 6?
Third, The College Board demands that readers read “supportively.”
That means readers are trained to look for positive aspects to reward
rather than negative aspects to punish. That means that the
readers are literally rooting for you.
Fourth, readers are trained to ignore handwriting as much
as is humanly possible. Particularly difficult handwriting will
be bumped up to more experienced readers. However, one way to get
a zero is to write illegibly. So, while we don’t recommend totally
retooling your handwriting, make sure to be as neat as you can.
Fifth, despite what you may have heard, a longer essay
doesn’t equal a higher score. Longer is not necessarily better.
In fact, readers are specifically told to judge essays as is, holistically,
and by using the scoring rubric. If a shorter essay earns a 6, so
be it. Furthermore, and most important, the idea that writing a
long essay will automatically raise your score leads to some of
the worst possible essay-writing strategies. The SAT wants to see
a first draft that develops a well-thought-out and well-supported
point of view on the issue that is written engagingly, with varied
and mostly correct language. The point is to achieve that goal,
not to attain some “magic” length within the allotted time.
Finally, the readers couldn’t care less whether you quote
Plato’s Republic, your own diary, or an advertising
jingle. What matters is the appropriateness of
your evidence, examples, and reasons, not the status of the knowledge
you use to support your argument and point of view.